I like old things
broken and discarded
Old faces are a mystery to me
and I wonder what they have seen
I’m shaving in a mirror
with a used razor blade
before I go to work
to an all too common job
As I get older
I care less what people say
They care less about what I say
until we reach a stalemate
Give me time alone
and I instantly feel better
Falling in love
with my own fantasies
How many of us
remain uncovered
undiscovered
treasures
that don’t want to be found
I look at society
moving at a rushing pace
and I wonder at the people
who have been discarded
Those lost souls
who have lived differently
and don’t need as much
as the rest of us
Old things whisper to me
just like they whisper to you
You must listen
to hear them
Life away from life is living.
My breath is foreign in the wasteland
and I am more grateful for it.
Interesting piece, I am going to reblog this one for you.
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Thank you old poet 56! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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“Life away from life is living.
My breath is foreign in the wasteland
and I am more grateful for it.”
I appreciate your final turn toward gratitude.
I wonder about what life away looks like and feels like.
Is it absent of others expectations of us?
What inside is reveals itself that we confront?
Thanks for the mystery you describe.
Where is the wasteland?
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Life away from Life is my dream world, or my own personal reality–how I see the world differently. You can look at ugliness and see beauty. I think the wasteland is society. To be foreign in society, and be grateful that we are not the same as everybody else. Thanks for reading Felipe, and for your thought-provoking questions. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles.
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I get the thoughts about age, probably because I am old. 🙂
Many thanks for following my blog, which is appreciated.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thank you for reading!
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I’m I’m reblogging this too, to my readers at sister site Timeless Wisdoms
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That is probably why you like me enough to follow Sound Bite Fiction!
Thank you for that, and for tempting me to visit, I really enjoyed this piece.
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You are most welcome! Thank you for reading. 🙂
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I get it. I like living in an old building. No new condo for me. No new razor blades for you,
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Beautiful
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I’m glad you liked it! 🙂
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Lovely! Thanks for following my blog. 🙂
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Thanks for following my blog. Love the poem!
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Lovely.
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Such an engaging, thought-provoking piece. Wonderful.
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Well that is spot on! Nicely done!
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That was lovely! I can relate. Thank you for following my blog. As I’m sure you understand I am in the hospital and will not be blogging for a while. Please feel free to enjoy my words that I’ve already written.
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I like that this poem did not rhyme and you varied the length of your lines very well.
Thank you for checking into my blog.
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Thanks for following my blog; I “really” like old things too!!! lol
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry! Thank you for following BrewNSpew and it’s good meeting you!
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Thank you so much Eugenia!
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My pleasure!
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Called by to leave my thanks for your recent decision to follow Learning from Dogs. Thank you!
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Thank you for following my blog!
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I am that certain age so I get your thoughts…Thank you for the follow 🙂
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Thanks!
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As I get older I am caring less and less what people think and say about me too. Loved the poem! 🙂
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Thank you Laurie! I feel the same way. 🙂
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I just won 3rd place in the poetry competition at http://www.sps.com. The poem will be posted on their website before August 15th.
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Congratulation to you on winning the third place in the poetry competition at http://www.sps.com!
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Thanks Sound Eagle!!!!
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You are very welcome. 🙂
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“Give me time alone
and I instantly feel better”
This one resonated with me so much! I feel better when I’m alone. I’m going to quote this one from now on 🙂
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Yes, my alone time is sacred!
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This was comforting.
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Hey, I’m so glad that you enjoyed my poem kamelia! Happy New Year! 🙂
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Thank you, happy new year to you as well
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Well written. Well said.
Old faces have stories to tell
Old faces are a treasure
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These old things, marked the passage to shere we are, and, it’s, not easy, to let go of these memories, so, we hold on to them, sometimes, longer than we’re, supposed, to…
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